The ed sentence
Try starting your sentence with the -ed form of the verb.it makes for punchy start to a sentence.
Remember the rule:When you have finished your -ed phrase,Place a comma,then write the rest of the sentence.
Some -ed words Surprised,excited,angered,possessed,committed,electrified,undaunted,overpowered,concerned,horrified,cornered,delighted,enthralled
examples:
Determined to win,Rhys runs for the try line to get the winning point in rugby.
Surprised to see,Rhys got muscles from working out and a six pack.
Horrified by the noise,Rhys Jumps out the window.
The power sentence
If you waffle a lot in you writing,try using a power sentence.Begin your paragraph with a power sentence of 12 words or less.Get straight to the point.
Examples-
Money is root of all evil.(7)
What is right,isint always popular.(6)
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