Essay sentences#3

 The ed sentence

Try starting your sentence with the -ed form of the verb.it makes for punchy start to a sentence.

Remember the rule:When you have finished your -ed phrase,Place a comma,then write the rest of the sentence.

Some -ed words Surprised,excited,angered,possessed,committed,electrified,undaunted,overpowered,concerned,horrified,cornered,delighted,enthralled

examples:

Determined to win,Rhys runs for the try line to get the winning point in rugby.

Surprised to see,Rhys got muscles from working out and a six pack. 

Horrified by the noise,Rhys Jumps out the window.

The power sentence

If you waffle a lot in you writing,try using a power sentence.Begin your paragraph with a power sentence of 12 words or less.Get straight to the point.

Examples-

Money is root of all evil.(7)

What is right,isint always popular.(6)

Essay Sentences#2

The 'w' sentence.

Try starting your sentence with a 'w' word. These sentences make your work sound thoughtful and knowledgeable.

Remember the rule: not every 'w' word marks as a sentence starter. Remember where to put a comma in when the parts of the sentence affected by your 'w' are finished.

Some 'w' words you can use: who, while, whilst, whereas, when, where, what, with, who, whom

Examples: Whilst the teacher was talking, the students were pretending to listen. With a majority of the votes, Hitler seized power. When the bell rings, we run to leave class.

My own examples: Whilst I walked home, I remembered I had homework. Why he did it, I don't know. When mum yelled, he hid from her. Whilst I worked, other students were talking. Whilst they waited for the bus, they talked about their classes. When the earthquake hit, the children screamed. While some kids ran, others walked. 

The 'ing' sentence

Try starting the sentence the -ing form of the verb. 

Remember the rule: when you have finished your -ing phase, place a comma, then write the rest of the sentence. 

Some words you can use: listening, watching, running, reciting, realising, emerging, grasping, speaking, analysing, signalling, exposing.

Examples: Realising the danger, people fled from the city. Shaking away the nerves, he approached the  microphone. Emerging from the water, the swimmer was greeted with cheers.

My own examples: Realising he had messed up, he made amens. Emerging from nowhere, the monster attacked. Grasping for air, he finally made it above the surface. Watching them calmly, he took notes. 

Essay sentences#1

 Adverb-describes a verb-Quickly

Verb-Doing word-Swimming

Preposition-A word that gives location of movement-Under

The Adverb sentence

Start the sentence with an adverb, it adds interest and intrigue

Remember the rule:When you start the sentence with an adverb you need to put comma after the adverb and then finish the sentence.

Adverbs-Slowly,interesting,suddenly,often,surprisingly,simply,excitedly,unfortunately,fortunately,confusingly,convincingly,remarkably,significantly,firstly.

Example-surprisingly,Mrs Handley,was on time to class.

Unfortunately,she had forgotten her keys.

Cautiously, he unlocked the kennel and waited for the dog’s reaction.
Solemnly, the policeman approached the mayor and placed him under arrest.
Suddenly, he slammed the door shut and sprinted across the street.

The preposition sentence:

Remember the rule:when you start a sentence with a preposition,you need to put a comma when the movement or position ends.

In, 2013, Hornby high accepted year 7/8 students through out my time at school, I have learnt many things.

Preposition:In througout,under,above,between,below,on,around,near,against,within,after.

Games at health

Hi at health we got set a task to play games.When we played Evan straight up cheated in connect four so i went down he went down i went up then he cheated with a big mac combo then i watched a couple boys play this game it was pretty funny then we were about to play uno then we just chilled and watched the boys play the game again.

Dogs are better than cats as pets

 I strongly think that dogs are better than cats because the more friendly they are more humble than cats plus they can see ghost i think.Dogs have better brains like when you train it it could do a lot of tricks like sit,stand,high five and thing a human and probably do and they act so calmly and they are mans best friends.